HOW'S MY DRIVING?

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How am I doing with Ling? Love him, hate him? Unsure about something? Is there an area in which I can improve? I'm always looking to improve him and my writing in general, so anything you have for me is welcome.

Please do use specific examples if you can, and note if this is in reference to soul_campaign or country_within_the_palace. Thanks!

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